Topic: Rituals
Thesis:
Composed with everything in mind, Second Life weddings are based on the extravagant details, out of the ordinary places, and over the top clothing.
Thesis:
Composed with everything in mind, Second Life weddings are based on the extravagant details, out of the ordinary places, and over the top clothing.
this is not a thesis statement that would go at the end of your introduction...and also, avoid the real life comparison...just discuss sl...threre will be plenty for you to write about just with that...revise and email me your revised statement...
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